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And I looked into the pit of pits.
The blackest scariest darkness I have ever seen.
The devil himself wouldn't live there.
I Can't see the bottom,
Or even hear the echo of my thoughts.
My thoughts, hopes and dreams have all died here.
As my soul has swallowed them all in their infancy.
Too feeble and sickly to survive the real world.
And my heart,
Beats its rythmic beat.
With nothing but blood to fill it.
The passions of a man in love are gone into the pit.
Nothing remains but the coldness of me.
And Strange as it is...
I like it.
©2004-2009 ~darkknight7781
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BEAUTIFUL and to me, FLAWLESS. I love the beginning, I love the description, I love how you describe it, and why it is there, and I adore the twist at the end, that you like it! Beautiful! My favorite without a doubt!

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Art defines our reality, who we are, where we are going, as how sad defines happy... --It is our counter-existance.

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